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All Deviations
All Deviations

on the amstutz expressway by ~shes-a-vamp:iconshes-a-vamp:





I woke up to a breeze,
lying on the Amstutz Expressway
naked.

I didn’t move.

The sky looked like it was caving in on itself,
A gaping vortex of clouds and molecules
Interminterspersedingling

                                              And there was no noise.

                                           That was the strangest part.

No cars,
Just my back on the cracked pavement
And that sky.

It’s been 15 hours and 15 minutes since I woke in a panic
Wide eyed heavy breath fingers grasping the sheets
Sprawled out on the Amstutz Expressway
Lifeless and hushed
Thick cold invading my bones.

Eventually I stood up
To the gaping eyes of empty factories and
The
Trainstation
Everything had stopped.

I sank back to the asphalt
In wonder worry
Stood up
Mad with white
Alone on the Amstutz Expressway
Going nowhere
From nowhere
Walking
Barefooted
Naked
Seeing no faces cars
Silence
Nothing
Silence.

Do I dare breathe?

Inhale.
Stare at fingers.
Exhale.

Tears come bent kneed ass to the chill staring out into empty.

Cell phone rings.
It’s home


And there’s no one there.

But I am intact
Alone
On the Amstutz Expressway.
©2007-2008 ~shes-a-vamp
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a dream i had. almost verbatim. (i was narrating in my head)

i drive on the amstutz expressway every day to and from work, it's a 2.5 mile four lane highway to nowhere.

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~skiesoforange:iconskiesoforange: Dec 21, 2007, 3:44:50 PM
I hated driving on that thing every day to work. There isn't a smooth lane, and it just goes straight to the shitend of North Chicago (not to be confused with the northside of the city of Chicago)
~shes-a-vamp:iconshes-a-vamp: Dec 21, 2007, 11:35:06 PM
yeah, but i like it.

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i'd love to get inside your head, but i've misplaced my scalpel..
~Viris:iconViris: Dec 22, 2007, 5:11:38 AM
You obviously have much better dreams than me..!
I find this kindof different to other stuff in your gallery, more... coherent? Maybe. I like it a lot anyway. 'Interminterspersedingling'- best word ever.

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"Ten years before, she would have been considered pretty; now, with lines around her mouth and the stain of persistent dissapointment in her eyes, she was almost beautiful."

from "The Dumb House" - John Burnside
~shes-a-vamp:iconshes-a-vamp: Dec 22, 2007, 9:53:26 AM
Thank you! i think the subject matter is a lot more clear. i've noticed that i tend to be more vague than coherent a lot of the time. this dream was still pretty freaky though...

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i'd love to get inside your head, but i've misplaced my scalpel..
~BlasphemousKing:iconBlasphemousKing: Dec 22, 2007, 1:55:55 PM
Reading this dream my mind begins to play music.

Without civilization mechanism (silence) it is very inspiring..
~shes-a-vamp:iconshes-a-vamp: Dec 22, 2007, 2:06:19 PM
thank you. this means a great deal to me. music has always been such a strong influence to me, and sometimes silence makes the best music.

thank you again.

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i'd love to get inside your head, but i've misplaced my scalpel..
~BlasphemousKing:iconBlasphemousKing: Dec 23, 2007, 12:44:09 PM
At times I sometimes see different worlds just in music... Yet most of the time my language of choice is music..
Silence is truly amazing, yet almost mind boggling to find... Though I have learned over the years to block out the cacophony of civilization.

You're most welcome.
~shes-a-vamp:iconshes-a-vamp: Dec 24, 2007, 1:30:35 AM
beautifully stated.

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i'd love to get inside your head, but i've misplaced my scalpel..